You've touched important points. If I can sum it up, I'd say you talk about finding your niche and your target audience and address your work there, instead just everywhere? Also, let the product speak for itself?

I can't help but ask your opinion on my last work here. It's a comedy piece again and as you're a great humorist, any advice you could give me will be of use. :))) https://medium.com/@nevenapascaleva/santa-claus-versus-father-frost-ddd388584902